My Holiday at Whanagata
We were nearly there. My mum was getting tired of driving as Max and I couldn't wait to arrive at Whanangata, we couldn’t sit any longer. It was the first Tuesday of the holidays and we were driving up to Whanagata to sees our friends Bobbie, Hannah and Gemma.
When we arrived Max and I jumped right out of the car to grab some fresh air. We all trotted up to see Bobbie, Hannah and Gemma. Once we had said hello my mum told Max and I to go unpack the car, So max and I did what we were told and unpacked the car, the car was as full as a bull.
The car was unpacked and everybody didn’t know what to do. later Max, Hannah, Gemma and I went downstairs to play Marco-Polo.
The weather spoiled our holiday because there was only one crack of sunlight the whole trip, but we still had a lot of fun.
By Ella Moir
Ella this is an awesome recount about the holidays
ReplyDeleteYou have added lots of adjectives.
Well done
From Stella